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Re: The problem is- part one PLEASE CRITIQUE THIS.
be honest, I didn't read the whole thing. First of all, the first sentence is a big turn off. It doesn't draw the reader in and it makes NO SENSE! ...
Feb 1, 2007 -
Re: Eyes of Elves
Sounds good. You can't go wrong with elves. You need to fix some typos, I think, because I couldn't make out some of it. You should keep with it; it ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: This is about insanity
Considering, I guess, that this is "Lyric poetry", are you really insane? :wink: but aren't we all? Besides that, I thought it sounded cool. most of it I didn't really ...
Dec 19, 2006